First trail of my section with talking

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fGML7Eyjj5M

Here is the first trail of my first sound design with the animation piece all together, the sound quality went really well when putting all the sound together as I had most of it prepared already. when doing it I found that using my own voice and changing the pitches of it come out better than using secondary resources such as youtube as the quality and base come out better. However the group did not like the sound effect with go away in it as they find the message come across clear enough without the talking.

Animatic run-through of the middle section

Here is the animatic part that I have done the outline and colour fill in for, BT did the animations part of it. Before I then had to redo and add in more frame as to when doing the final version/ presentation we found that areas of this were not long enough therefore to get across the impact that we wanted to have for the piece plus the effect.