Do you think the color matches the gorillas of a gorilla? | Yes |
| Do you like the background? | Yes and no the color she likes and the fact it was simple but when getting into detail with her she found it difficult to separate between the trees and the rest of the background. So now I think I need to add in a more bold line. |
| Do you like the color chosen for the background? | yes, but thinking now it makes the color bolder and add in less pastel. |
| Does the beginning section make sense? | Yes |
| Does the middle section make sense ? | Yes and no,understood the door part and where the cloud was actually his thoughts and that he had to go into them so that part was clear, however i had to explain it to her and what it meant so might have to rethink the door section? |
| Do the points I am explaining come across very well? | Yes , but the crocodile and leopard eating the gorilla seem quite unsettling and upset her so will taking that out. And the beginning part where the gorilla is looking out doesn’t make much sense so take that away as well. |
| Does the ending make sense? | YesMaybe talking to her might use camera angle and maybe change the perspectives around so it gives it different levels and angels |
| Is it too scary? | No |
| Does the overall story make sense? | Yes |
| Do you think I should add in different designs for each monkey? | No, as it can make it too complicated for her to understand and get lost by the meaning and the purpose of but trying to create too much character in terms of what is going on. |
| Does it look too childish? (I asked this too my 13 year old brother to get his view) | No it doesn’t it look engaging and easy for everyone to understand as for him i looked simple but as it is going to displayed all around and not something that is going stand for a long period of time and as we don’t have long the message get across fast enough but easy enough for ot to be understood. Reason why I asked him to get another age view. |
| Do you think the main character has enough impact? | Yes it does where my sister wanted to follow him across the story and she wanted him for a toy if she saw it in the gift shop. Which is the response I was hoping for. |
As I know for the project that it was based around 5-8 who visit the museums and need a simple character and stories to keep them interested in.
So I gave my sister a list of questions and asked her to rate them between yes and no here the character was good or bad and if the story is easy for her to understand.
I made the question quite simple for her to understand that I am only 12 and I didn’t want to make it too complicated. Overall I found talking to my sister and getting a young person point of view was benfinical and made developing my animation towards her target audience much easier and clever to understand. And to see what she understands and gets to show me out inganced other children around her age group will be.